Camp NaNoWriMo Day 26: Some Structural Changes

this is dream sequence two of four now.

May opened up her eyes to see
what her surroundings came to be
and what did materialize?
her art classroom, before her eyes

there was no talking pig in sight
or squawking bird to cause her fright
her teacher and her class were there
with paints and papers all prepared

"Good morning, May" the teacher said
"We were worried you were dead
"But now you're here and you're alive
"and everyone has now arrived."

"We can now begin our art
"so take a brush and do your part
"today we paint whatever we
"are feeling deep inside" said she.

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and this stanza goes at the end of everything to introduce the finale:

​Then like before the darkness came
and snapped May to the astral plane
she spun and fell and jerked and popped
and twisted taught until it stopped.